Emasher's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Another Message From Me]

Please stop.

The first one was enough. If people didn't like the first one, quit bitching about it and make something better. I'll tell you why people don't like these.

1) The dial up noise is annoying.
2) The text is hard to read.
3) You insult the watcher.
4) There's no entertainment value in it.

If you want to make some good flash videos. Look at some tutorials and learn to animate and draw better.

I suppose you're just going to respond to this saying I don't know what I'm talking about and I should get off the portal. But you really should listen to what I'm trying to tell you.

[experimental flash finish]

Great flash.

That was really good. I especially liked the bit with the tree. Keep up the good work.

[Mario's Day Off 2]

Better than some.

It was quite a bit better than the stuff some people produce early on. Though, it needed more animation in it. And perhaps a bit of voice acting. The dialogue really wasn't that funny though, if it was funnier this could have been much better. You have the skills, so I hope you continue with flash and make something great one day.

ToxicFog responds:

Thank you man! Yes I will continue doing this!

[wanty Apple]

Good for your first.

It was pretty good, aside from fixing a few graphical glitches, you could maybe animate the guy's legs as he walked. But it was really good for your first flash. Keep up the good work.

[Stake by TonyAzemia]

meh

The animation was ok, but overall it wasn't that good. The backgrounds weren't very well done, never use gradients like that.

Its not really a good idea to post the first few things you make on NG, you really should only post stuff that you think other people will be entertained by. Though I think you could turn out to be a good animator so I hope you stick around and post more stuff once you improve.

TonyAzemia responds:

:| ouch! im a good animator but i dont use flash alot i use paper and stopmotion animations but the background i didnt really care about really i was gonna make a table as the background and so on so on blah blah blah

[Crazy Laws: Kansas]

Meh.

This is probably something that would be better on youtube or maybe a joke site. Those were funny, but it would be better if maybe there was an animated person talking about them with visual descriptions in the background or something.

[Endless "What is love"]

...

The drawing was good, but there isn't much point in watching it for more than a few seconds. As its just a clip repeating over and over. Music videos really need a good animation to be worth watching. Keep trying though, your drawing skills are certainly good enough for you to go on to make something great one day.

[Honey do you love me]

Why...

There's really no value at all in this. Its just a picture zooming in and out while music plays in the background. If you want to make a good music video, you should do some real animation. I liked the interface though.

[Random Violent Fight]

Actually, its not that bad.

That wasn't too bad a movie. The only thing I didn't like was the gradients. They just didn't fit with the rest of animation. Sound effects would have made it better too perhaps. Keep up the good work. I look forward to seeing what you contribute to the portal in the future.

Emby responds:

Well thanks. Though, sound effects wouldn't be that great, if you have music added in.

[A Message From Me]

...

All this does is prove that it only took a few minutes to make your first "movie". I think my ear is starting to bleed from hearing that sound effect more than once.

Grumio responds:

But this isn't my first movie.