Emasher's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Operation Neptune: Part 1]

Great!

Although, the art wasn't the best (though it was good), the animation and the flash overall was great. Can't wait for the next one.

9voltproductions responds:

Thanks man

[Heil Hitler!!!]

Wrong in so many ways.

Pro-Hitler flashes are just wrong in so many ways. A man that killed thousands of civilians and tried to take over the world should not be honored.

In terms of the actual flash, don't distort images, it looks terrible.

Also, inserting a bitmap that is larger than not the stage, but the actual area you have to work in, will result in the image being pure red once the flash is compiled. The best way around this is to take it into Photoshop, Fireworks, or Illustrator and slice it and put it back together and then group or convert it to a symbol so it stays together.

Fautzo responds:

Ok, thanks for the advice, and this is an animutation, look it up in the collections page.

[The Substitute Teacher]

Awesome!

I actually had a sub almost exactly like that. This brings back a few funny memories.

The actual flash work wasn't perfect, but it was much better than a lot of stuff on here. The main problem was that the audio didn't match up with the animation, but since its your first submission, you're forgiven. Good work.

KevinButtchin responds:

Yeah i dont know why its outta sync. I'll try fixing it

[Bush is Undecisive]

Awesome.

That was a great animation. The only thing was the audio. The audio quality wasn't the best, I'd suggest buying an external microphone if you're going to continue doing voice overs. Also, you don't really sound like Bush, and you didn't really try to change your voice for the secret service agent. Perhaps you could get a friend to do the voice overs in your next movie. The animation was good and pretty funny and I liked the art style. Keep making good animations like this.

C-Doodlez-Man responds:

yep. my friend does good bush and obama voices so :D

[~Run~]

Amazing.

The animation in this is perhaps some of the best I've seen on the site. I loved the bits where he was falling, and the bits in the canyon. A few suggestions would be to make the glow slightly less obvious, and maybe add some more detail into the characters. But on the visual side, that was one of the best done movies on the site. Keep up the good work.

FU5ION responds:

Thanks for your comment, I was really stunned by it!

Also thanks for those comments about the glow and the char, I will have a look into that to see it from your perspective.

Thanks again.

[Mario's Day Off 2]

Better than some.

It was quite a bit better than the stuff some people produce early on. Though, it needed more animation in it. And perhaps a bit of voice acting. The dialogue really wasn't that funny though, if it was funnier this could have been much better. You have the skills, so I hope you continue with flash and make something great one day.

ToxicFog responds:

Thank you man! Yes I will continue doing this!

[Stake by TonyAzemia]

meh

The animation was ok, but overall it wasn't that good. The backgrounds weren't very well done, never use gradients like that.

Its not really a good idea to post the first few things you make on NG, you really should only post stuff that you think other people will be entertained by. Though I think you could turn out to be a good animator so I hope you stick around and post more stuff once you improve.

TonyAzemia responds:

:| ouch! im a good animator but i dont use flash alot i use paper and stopmotion animations but the background i didnt really care about really i was gonna make a table as the background and so on so on blah blah blah

[Random Violent Fight]

Actually, its not that bad.

That wasn't too bad a movie. The only thing I didn't like was the gradients. They just didn't fit with the rest of animation. Sound effects would have made it better too perhaps. Keep up the good work. I look forward to seeing what you contribute to the portal in the future.

Emby responds:

Well thanks. Though, sound effects wouldn't be that great, if you have music added in.

[A Message From Me]

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All this does is prove that it only took a few minutes to make your first "movie". I think my ear is starting to bleed from hearing that sound effect more than once.

Grumio responds:

But this isn't my first movie.

[Flash-1]

This is great for your first flash!

All it needs is blood and sound effects. Maybe you could some how work a story into it.

Zeth29 responds:

>:( no
no story, what's done is done, unless it's very simple and can be fixed in a few seconds. i don't linger on past projects, thanks :D